Sunday, February 9, 2014

Keeping It Clean



I learned some valuable lessons about reading and writing when I was growing up. From the time I learned to read, I constantly had my nose in a book. Judy Bolton and Nancy Drew mysteries were my favorites. Good, clean stories with intriguing plots and characters I came to know and to love. More than anything I wanted to write mysteries like Margaret Sutton and Carolyn Keene when I grew up.

My father nourished my love of reading by bringing books home to me from time to time. Dad wasn’t much of a fiction reader but he knew how much I enjoyed a good mystery so, for a change of pace, one day when I was ten or eleven years old, he brought me a copy of “I, the Jury,” a Mickey Spillane novel. I picked it up and started to read, amazed and secretly pleased that Dad had given me such an “adult” book. A day or so later, I had left my book on the coffee table, book marker in place, and Dad happened to pick it up and read a page. His eyes got wide and he immediately confiscated the book. No more Mickey Spillane for me! 

Back then, I was disappointed when Dad took my book away but, as an adult, I’ve come to realize that what intrigued me as a child (probably because it was “forbidden”) bores me now. When I read a mystery/suspense novel with several paragraphs or pages of descriptive sexual acts, I find myself skimming over those parts to get back to the story. 

I’m not a prude and I have no problem with a sex scene and/or “colorful” language if it’s necessary to the plot and, of course, it's perfectly acceptable and even expected in certain types of novels. A steamy romance wouldn't be very steamy without, well, some steam. By the same token, in a book about a street gang, I can't imagine one of the members saying, "Gosh, darn it!" when he's angry. That’s unrealistic and I think fiction should be realistic, believable. But, in my Malone mystery series, I chose not to use certain words and to leave what happens behind bedroom doors (or anywhere else, for that matter) to the reader’s imagination. Because, it’s my belief that you can have a good story and still keep it clean.

18 comments:

  1. I agree with all you have stated. For the record, the only sexual activity that interests me, is what goes on in my own life.

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    1. Rosemary, we all know "how" it's done so why read about somebody else doing it. :)

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  2. Synchronicity! Omigosh, Pat! You can not imagine how timely this is for me. Thank you for this post.

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    1. Sharon,
      Now you've got me intrigued. I'm not sure what you mean but I'm glad you enjoyed the post.

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  3. Why does a writer of mystery novels wish to insert a sexual fantasy into an otherwise intriguing story? Toss the book away.

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    1. I agree, Dac! Sometimes, I get the feeling they're using explicit sex scenes to increase their word count. There are other ways!

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  4. Good post, Pat, and one that needed to be written. Many authors, as with comedians today, feel they must spice up the story where it is not needed. I think, as with the comedians, they are afraid they can’t make it without some titillation. Write a “good” story and you won’t need a crutch.

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  5. Very well said. It's similar to regular communication with friends, family, peers, or strangers. I strive not to say inappropriate things or to use foul language. In my profession, however, it's standard, especially among the people I chase or put in jail. I choose to communicate in a manner they understand, yet it still bothers me. Anyway, great blog today! Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Chris, when in Rome. . . . I've been known to use a bit of profanity myself. (If my close friends are reading this, they're laughing at the phrase "a bit of.") But, I watch my language around children and in certain social or professional circles.

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  6. I agree completely and I'm so glad you spoke up. When I worked at a library, I had several patrons come in and say, "Pleeease! Don't you have some good mysteries (or whatever genre) that don't have graphic sex and language? That's getting old." I agreed. : )
    Marja McGraw

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    1. Marja,
      You know me well enough to know that I'm not shy about speaking up. :)
      Sex is everywhere these days and in some very inappropriate places, I think. Commercials on TV for sexual enhancement products are one example. I mean, really!

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  7. Like you, Pat, I enjoy a read that focuses on the story and the intricacies of the characters rather than body parts and explicit language. I'm not a prude either. I've uttered my fair share of 4-letter words and read more sex scenes than most (if only because prior to getting published I was told it was a required element), but NOW when it comes to reading and writing I prefer flinch free stories. Great post!

    Anne K. Albert

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    1. Thanks for stopping by, Anne. I'm glad you enjoyed my post. :)

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  8. Good comments, Pat. I believe certain types of books almost require sex scenes, but I think it's much better if they're not explicit. A relationship hinted at is better than one that goes into detail. In the cozy mysteries I write, the only glimmer of sex is when Kathleen, the nosy sister, wonders what is going on between two characters.

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    1. Helen,
      I agree. Some books do require sex scenes. But, in my opinion, even when they do, too much time spent in the bedroom - or wherever - takes away from the story.

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  9. As a mystery writer, I don't feel inspired to write sex scenes.

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    1. I'm glad to hear that, Marilyn. That's probably one of the reasons I love your books!

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